KICK by John L Monk

Every day I scan the daily list of Kindle Free deals. This one caught my eye:

**2014 Amazon Breakthrough Novel Award Quarter Finalist** 

Dan Jenkins returns from death for a chance to live again. The bodies of killers are his rides. 

Before he’s kicked out, Dan needs to stop his hosts from hurting anyone else. It’s one of the rules if he wants more rides. More rides means more movies and fishing trips, and more of those little apple pies they sell at gas stations and convenience stores, because they’re just that good. 

For a dead guy, it’s a pretty good gig…until someone changes the rules.

Lots of books sound good, but most  do not pass my page one test. I usually go for at least a chapter, then skip ahead to see if it gets better. Novice writers often fail to build momentum until the third chapter or so. I…